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Cedric's avatar

Very evocative imagery!

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

Eden, you’re just incredible with your imagery and the way you weave these. Well done! Congrats on 200!

The House Still Exists's avatar

thank you ethereal!! i appreciate the kind words. your feedback means alot to me

taylor jean's avatar

i knew this was going to be good. such a haunting picture you paint. makes me remember my late teens and the way i found my comfort in the things that numbed me. amazing as always 🤍

The House Still Exists's avatar

i love that you liked it - it was a great piece to write. self harm is a difficult topic to approach but i felt it was better portrayed like this.

𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗽𝘂𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗹 ★'s avatar

I'm screaming because i was just wondering when you would post omfg!!

Loved it as always. 🤍

The House Still Exists's avatar

AAAAA thank you twin!! atleast i wasnt forgotten in my short abscence. im so glad you enjoyed it - it's pretty good imo

𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗽𝘂𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗹 ★'s avatar

Bro you're not gonna be forgotten in your time away, your writing is tooo fucking good.

You're honestly one of the people i look forward to when i get on substack. And this poem is really good.

We gotta collab on something again soon!