This cyber-gothic and religious blend is intriguing.
It’s aggressive in a way I like, but with restraint, without trying too hard to be shocking. Anyone can be a street hawker; few can sell things under the counter. You manage to sell things under the counter. Shouting, perhaps, but with the right words. You invert religious hierarchies at the end. I really liked that.
I envy that bold kind of aggression, but it’s elegant.
And I also think that if I read it as a love poem, I would want to receive a poem like this.
This cyber-gothic and religious blend is intriguing.
It’s aggressive in a way I like, but with restraint, without trying too hard to be shocking. Anyone can be a street hawker; few can sell things under the counter. You manage to sell things under the counter. Shouting, perhaps, but with the right words. You invert religious hierarchies at the end. I really liked that.
I envy that bold kind of aggression, but it’s elegant.
And I also think that if I read it as a love poem, I would want to receive a poem like this.
The title is already so clever
This is mind bending! I’m here for it! 🌀
im so glad you enjoy it - your words mean the world to me
Wow I envy you so much
I wish I could write out gothic stuff
Teach me your ways MESSIAH