I don't know poetry terms but it's the rhythm and punch of each word you choose, sounding like unravelling bramble, complex, capturing the manufactured intelligence. Also, I'm a sucker for things that are mouthy and verbose. The more complex and tangled it is but still streamlined, the more it sounds good in my head- and fun to speak. I'm going to try reading this out loud.
I don't know poetry terms but it's the rhythm and punch of each word you choose, sounding like unravelling bramble, complex, capturing the manufactured intelligence. Also, I'm a sucker for things that are mouthy and verbose. The more complex and tangled it is but still streamlined, the more it sounds good in my head- and fun to speak. I'm going to try reading this out loud.
Oh fuck. I really like this one. So far I think it's your best.