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Dion's avatar

So much to dissect within this tantalizing piece; the imagery is beautiful.

Certified Thug, PhD's avatar

another banger

eden's avatar

this is why ur the goat 🐐

Amanda Talavera's avatar

I like your writing style! Your choice of words draws out the passion between the lovers. I felt everything, and I love it.

eden's avatar

thank you so much!! i really appreciate it!! i try to write with a diverse vocabulary and try to find new words to sneak into my poems constantly. i find that part of it really exciting because you can invoke so much with so little.

Cory's avatar

this feels visceral, I love it